O May I Join the Choir Invisible! and Other Favorite Poems — Reading Notes
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The collection opens with George Eliot's title poem, a meditation on immortality achieved through influence on others, structured as a single, unbroken stanza of blank verse. The poem's central image—the "choir invisible"—recurs as a metaphor for a diffuse, posthumous presence, contrasting with the more concrete, narrative-driven poems that follow. Robert Browning's "How They Brought the Good News from Ghent to Aix" employs a galloping anapestic meter and a relentless sequence of place names to simulate the urgency of a ride. The shift from Eliot's abstract, philosophical voice to Browning's breathless, physical action marks a deliberate structural juxtaposition within the volume.
Movement and Momentum in Browning's Ride
Browning's poem is built on a single, sustained action: a ride to deliver news. The structure mirrors the journey's pace. The opening lines—"I sprang to the stirrup, and Joris and he: / I galloped, Dirck galloped, we galloped all three"—establish a triple rhythm that rarely falters. The poem progresses through a series of named towns (Lokeren, Boom, Düffeld, Mecheln), each marking a stage of the journey and a change in light or sound. The riders move from "moonset" through "twilight" to morning, with the church-steeple's "half-chime" providing an auditory marker. This accumulation of sensory detail—the tightening of girths, the rebuckling of straps—grounds the poem in physical reality, even as the destination and the nature of the "good news" remain unspecified. The ride itself becomes the subject, not its outcome.
The Natural World as a Source of Song
Percy Bysshe Shelley's "To a Skylark" offers a contrasting approach to structure and imagery. Instead of a linear narrative, the poem circles around a single subject—the skylark's song—through a series of similes and metaphors. The bird is compared to "a cloud of fire," "an unbodied joy," and "a star of Heaven." Each stanza attempts to capture the essence of the song through analogy, but the poem repeatedly acknowledges the inadequacy of language: "What thou art we know not; / What is most like thee?" The skylark is never seen, only heard, and its song is described as pouring "in profuse strains of unpremeditated art." This emphasis on spontaneous, natural creativity contrasts with the deliberate, crafted verse of the other poets in the collection, highlighting a Romantic ideal of inspiration.
Elizabeth Barrett Browning's Domestic and Devotional Voice
Elizabeth Barrett Browning's contribution, likely a sonnet or lyric from Sonnets from the Portuguese or another sequence, shifts the collection's focus inward. Her poems often employ a first-person speaker who addresses a beloved or a divine presence, blending intimate emotion with religious diction. The structure is typically compact, with tight rhyme schemes and a volta or turn in thought. In contrast to Eliot's expansive blank verse or Browning's driving anapests, Barrett Browning's lines are more measured, often building toward a personal revelation. Her imagery draws on domestic and natural details—a rose, a candle, a kiss—that ground abstract feelings in tangible objects. This voice provides a counterpoint to the public, heroic mode of the other poems, offering a quieter, more introspective register.
The Volume's Architecture: From Immortality to the Immediate
The arrangement of the four poems creates a deliberate arc. Eliot's opening poem posits an afterlife lived through memory and influence, a grand, abstract vision. Browning's narrative then grounds that vision in a specific, physical journey. Shelley's ode lifts the reader back into the air, celebrating a pure, unmediated song. Barrett Browning's lyric returns to the personal, the intimate space where such ideals are tested. The collection thus moves from the cosmic to the terrestrial, from the eternal to the momentary, without resolving the tension between them. The 1884 D. Lothrop and Company edition, illustrated and titled after Eliot's poem, frames the entire volume as a meditation on what endures—whether in deeds, in song, or in love.
Readers may find it useful to compare how each poet handles the passage of time: Eliot's poem looks forward to a future beyond death, Browning's compresses time into a single urgent ride, Shelley's suspends time in a moment of pure listening, and Barrett Browning's dwells in the present of feeling. The volume rewards attention to these temporal strategies, as well as to the recurring images of music, light, and flight that link the poems across their differences.
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